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HOMEWORK:
1. WHAT IS YOUR PLAN TO LOSE WEIGHT?
In order to lose weight, I will cook every day. Also, I will no longer have dinner late .
I will also go to the gym. The most important thing that I will do is muscle.

2. WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU WERE GIVEN THE CHANCE TO MEET THE PRESIDENT OF YOUR
COUNTRY?
If given the chance to meet the President, I will tell my family . I also think that I will a mistake.
People might think it strange but I will prepare script.
I will definitely be proud myself if I meet the President.

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Hi, M. Nami! You provided interesting ideas with your answers. It's very important to stay healthy. Also, I hope you'd be able to meet the president someday. Please take care, and see you again!
--Teacher Anji



1. WHAT IS YOUR PLAN TO LOSE WEIGHT?
In order to lose weight, I will cook every day. 
>> CORRECT
Also, I will no longer have dinner late .
>> CORRECT
I will also go to the gym. 
>> CORRECT
The most important thing that I will do is muscle.
>>  The most important thing that I will do is muscle training.

2. WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF YOU WERE GIVEN THE CHANCE TO MEET THE PRESIDENT OF YOUR
COUNTRY?
If given the chance to meet the President, I will tell my family. 
>> If given the chance to meet the President, I will tell my family about it.
I also think that I will a mistake.
>> I also think that I will make a mistake.
People might think it strange but I will prepare script.
>> CORRECT
I will definitely be proud myself if I meet the President.
>> I will definitely be proud of myself if I meet the President.
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