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What role does love play in a relationship and how could it possibly work well?

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Love makes me think of others first. So it will reduce arguments. And it will help understanding others. Also, I think if I love others then it gets easier to love myself. Because if I see others generously then it is likely for me to think that others will also see me like that. So it makes me more generous to myself. And loving oneself helps to maintain a good relationship.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel 
Love makes me think of others first. 
>> Correct!
OR: Love forces me to put other people first. 
So it will reduce arguments. And it will help understanding others.
>> Correct!
OR: So, it will lessen disagreements. It will also facilitate understanding others.
Also, I think if I love others then it gets easier to love myself. 
>> Correct!
OR: In addition, I believe that loving others makes it simpler for me to love myself. 
Because if I see others generously then it is likely for me to think that others will also see me like that. 
>> Correct!
OR: Because if I see others generously, I am more likely to believe that others will perceive me similarly. 
So it makes me more generous to myself. And loving oneself helps to maintain a good relationship.
>> Correct!
OR: As a result, I become more generous with myself. And loving oneself contributes to maintaining a positive relationship.
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