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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some challenges of living in a country with a different culture?

I think the when living in abroad, the biggest different are culture and language.
The closet abroad countries to Korea are Japan and China.
They and my country's people similar in appearance, but there are differences culture, language, food.
And in case of the western countries, there many differences compared to the Asian countries.
That's why many people say, it's never easy to live in a foreign country.
I think, if I have a chance, it will be a new experience to live in a foreign country.
I like adventure(challenge) more than normal people.
So I sometimes make unusual decisions, but I think this challenge will have a positive impact on me.


Have a great weekend! ~ Camille teacher !
Thank you always!

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille



~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are some challenges of living in a country with a different culture?


I think the when living in abroad, the biggest different are culture and language.
>> I think when living in abroad, the biggest differences are culture and language.
The closet abroad countries to Korea are Japan and China.
>> The closest countries to Korea are Japan and China.
They and my country's people similar in appearance, but there are differences culture, language, food.
>> They and my country's people are similar in appearances, but there are differences in culture, language, food.
And in case of the western countries, there many differences compared to the Asian countries.
>> CORRECT!
That's why many people say, it's never easy to live in a foreign country.
>> CORRECT!
I think, if I have a chance, it will be a new experience to live in a foreign country.
>> CORRECT!
I like adventures (challenge) more than normal people.
>> CORRECT!
So I sometimes make unusual decisions, but I think this challenge will have a positive impact on me.
>> CORRECT!

Have a great weekend! ~ Camille teacher !
Thank you always!    [ You're welcome Keon! ~ T. Camille ]
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