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Do men or women make better friends? Does one gender have better friendships?

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I think women are more careful to friends. They make more effort not to hurt each other. Otherwise I think men are more likely to be have strong joke to each other. So it makes them more honest to each other. To respect and to be honest to each other are both important in friendship. But personally, I get hurt easily so I feel more comfortable with the friendship of women.

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Hello, Seong Eun!
Thanks for writing your homework.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel 
I think women are more careful to friends. They make more effort not to hurt each other. 
>> Correct!
OR: I believe women are more cautious around their friends. They make a greater effort not to hurt each other. 
Otherwise I think men are more likely to be have strong joke to each other. 
>> Correct!
OR: Otherwise, I believe men are more likely to tell strong jokes to one another. 
So it makes them more honest to each other. To respect and to be honest to each other are both important in friendship. 
>> Correct!
OR: As a result, they become more honest with one another. Friendship requires both mutual respect and honesty. 
But personally, I get hurt easily so I feel more comfortable with the friendship of women.
>> Correct!
OR: However, since I'm a sensitive person, I feel more at ease in a female friendship.
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