¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

June 10th homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¾È*Èñ
2024-06-12 1587

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

When I was first met my boss, I was nervous because she's same age with my mother and I was unfamiliar wtih older the elderly as like she.
She looks like untalkative person. But she only talked about negative things or her favorite singer. I've never seen anyone so passionate in fan activity.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Yeon Hee,

Thanks for sharing about your experience. First days always make us nervous! ^^

-Teacher Ash


When I was first met my boss, I was nervous because she's same age with my mother and I was unfamiliar wtih older the elderly as like she.

>> When I met my boss for the first time, I was nervous because she is the same age as my mom. I've never had an older boss before too, so this is new to me. 

She looks like untalkative person.
>> She looks like a quiet person. 

 But she only talked about negative things or her favorite singer. 
>> She always complains but she also likes to talk about her favorite singer. 

I've never seen anyone so passionate in fan activity.
>> I've never seen anyone so passionate with her favorite singer. 
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
137590 How do we stop the idea that people with disabilities should be... ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-06-04 1674
137589 Homework Àå*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1654
137588 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 2
137587 WiBro ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1616
137586 What is traditional food in your country? ±è*±â ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1428
137585 Waiting does not know end ÀÓ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 2803
137584 homework 06.03 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 910
137583 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 0
137582 Hobby ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1282
137581 What is your favorite snack? ÃÖ*¼º ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 2444
137580 2024.06.03 ¼÷Á¦ ¾ç*À² ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 0
137579 homework ±è*º° ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1
137578 Question suggestions ³ª*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1513
137577 Mar 31th\'s homework ¾È*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1784
137576 hw ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1
137575 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1216
137574 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 2
137573 5/31 Home work Àå*ÈÞ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 1946
137572 How can we better motivate people to separate their garbage more... ¾È*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 2
137571 Q) Identify a specific scenario where preventive measures are... ÃÖ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-03 8

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04