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June 12th homework

작성자: 안*희
2024-06-13 1961

회원님의 영작문

I met my favorite teacher when i was in second grade in college. She was acting teacher. As soon as we started our lesson, she said she lost her ring. My friends and I tried to find that. After 15 minutes, she said it was a fake. But she observed our finding action. Because it could look awkward when we were acting, so it was a training to bring out natural behavior. It was a big blow for us. She was really good at teaching acting. I felt I was growing up with that class. Everytime was exciting.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Yeon Hee,

Thanks for sharing your experience with your teacher. It must have been so fun to be part of her class. ^^


-Teacher Ash


I met my favorite teacher when i was in second grade in college.

>> I met my favorite teacher when I was in my second year of college.


She was acting teacher.

>>She was my acting teacher.


 As soon as we started our lesson, she said she lost her ring. 

>> CORRECT


My friends and I tried to find that. 

>> My friends and I tried to look for it.


After 15 minutes, she said it was a fake.

>> After 15 minutes, she told us that she did not actually lose it. 


 But she observed our finding action.

>> She just wants to observe our reaction. 


 Because it could look awkward when we were acting, so it was a training to bring out natural behavior.

>> It is because, it would look awkward if we knew it wasn’t true, so she thought it’s a training to evoke our genuine behavior. 


 It was a big blow for us. 

>> It was a big surprise for us. 


She was really good at teaching acting.

>> CORRECT


 I felt I was growing up with that class. 

>> I felt like I learned a lot in that class. 


Everytime was exciting.

>> Everyday, the acting class was exciting.


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