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The belief that economic progress is the paramount goal for governments is rooted in the idea that a strong economy is foundational for a nation's prosperity. Governments often prioritize economic growth because it correlates with improved living standards, increased employment opportunities, and overall social advancement. So, policies aimed at stimulating economic development are frequently pursued to boost a country's competitiveness and productivity on the global stage. However, there are things needed to be consider such as social, environmental and cultural progress. These progress should be equally crucial for the well being and sustainability of a nation. Especially, it has to be prioritized the relationship with North Korea because we are still only countries where are separated in the world. It would guarantee our safety if our government has proper measure. According to the statistics, the the happiest country where people are fully satisfied is not the countries w

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The belief that economic progress is the paramount goal for governments is rooted in the idea that a strong economy is foundational for a nation's prosperity. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Governments often prioritize economic growth because it correlates with improved living standards, increased employment opportunities, and overall social advancement.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 So, policies aimed at stimulating economic development are frequently pursued to boost a country's competitiveness and productivity on the global stage. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, there are things needed to be consider such as social, environmental and cultural progress. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
These progress should be equally crucial for the well being and sustainability of a nation.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 Especially, it has to be prioritized the relationship with North Korea because we are still only countries where are separated in the world. 
>>>  Especially, it has to prioritize [our] relationship with North Korea because we are [the] only countries [which] are [ still] separated in the world. 
It would guarantee our safety if our government has proper measure. 
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According to the statistics, the the happiest country where people are fully satisfied is not the countries.... 
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