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How important are first impressions to you?

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Personally, I think first impression is quite important regarding in working especially.
Many are working in there workplaces with varies people and we tend to have bias according to their face impressions, ways what they said and so on. And, we could be influenced by our further relationships accordingly.
For example, when I meet coworkers or people in my hospital, if somebody seems like be rude to some extent, I am reluctant to treat friendly and that tends to maintain within the relationship.
That is why, we have to be kind and nice to others regardless of our feelings.

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Hello, Ms. Jane! I completely agree with your opinion. I also think that first impressions last well beyond that moment. Thank you for sharing! 
-T. Sonny
Personally, I think first impression is quite important regarding in working especially.
>>Personally, first impression is quite important especially when it comes to work.
Many are working in there workplaces with varies people and we tend to have bias according to their face impressions, ways what they said and so on. 
>>Many meet various people in their workplaces and tend to have bias towards someone's physical attributes, speech and so on.
And, we could be influenced by our further relationships accordingly.
>>And these could therefore influence further relationships.
For example, when I meet coworkers or people in my hospital, if somebody seems like be rude to some extent, I am reluctant to treat friendly and that tends to maintain within the relationship.
>>For instance, when I meet my coworkers or new people in the hospital I work in, if someone seems rude at some extent, I become reluctant to be friendly which I tend to be throughout the relationship.
That is why, we have to be kind and nice to others regardless of our feelings.
>>Nevertheless, we have to be kind and nice to others in spite of our feelings.
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