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There are many factors people love someone.
It depends on their disposition.
Some people want to be chosen from lovers.
But I like choosing people.
People who I love can make my heart pumping.
At first outfit is factors of love. like voice ,eyes ,tall .
But time goes by. We can maintain it when we feel love and trust each other.

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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about love. Many people want to enjoy this feeling because it is one of the greatest feelings that brings satisfaction. As the saying goes, Love covers a multitude of weaknesses. 
May your heart be always filled with love.
Aki~


There are many factors people love someone.
>>> CORRECT!

It depends on their disposition.
>>> CORRECT!

Some people want to be chosen from lovers.
>>> CORRECT!

But I like choosing people.
>>> CORRECT!

People who I love can make my heart pumping.
>>> The people I love can make my heart race.

At first outfit is factors of love. like voice ,eyes ,tall .
>>> Initially, the outward appearance factors such as voice, eyes, and height, which are all aspects of love

But time goes by. We can maintain it when we feel love and trust each other.
>>> CORRECT!
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