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Why is it simpler to be nervous than confident in most situations?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-06-20 1698

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I prepare hard and have a good feeling, but when I encounter a situation, most people get nervous.
I think it's more because it's the first time most people experience a situation where they get nervous.
If you're an inexperienced person, it seems more nervous than confident.
There is also an atmosphere that places and situation give, and people are often overwhelmed by it.
For example, if you go to a company interview, you will be overwhelmed by the atmosphere as you prepare for answers with your competitors in a solemn and quiet atmosphere.
In this case, you feel more nervous because you have many competitors next to you, and moreover, the fact that there are many situations where the results cannot be guaranted also seems to play a part in being nervous.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!~
You made a great point about how most of the time we feel more anxious because we lack experience and knowledge. At the same time, as we master our craft, and gain more experience and knowledge we become more confident in various things
Chammy

I prepare hard and have a good feeling, but when I encounter a situation, most people get nervous.
I think it's more because it's the first time most people experience a situation where they get nervous.
If you're an inexperienced person, it seems more nervous than confident.
>>correct
There is also an atmosphere that places and situation give, and people are often overwhelmed by it.
>>There is also an atmosphere that places and situations give, and people are often overwhelmed by it.
For example, if you go to a company interview, you will be overwhelmed by the atmosphere as you prepare for answers with your competitors in a solemn and quiet atmosphere.
>>correct
In this case, you feel more nervous because you have many competitors next to you, and moreover, the fact that there are many situations where the results cannot be guaranted also seems to play a part in being nervous.
>> In this case, you feel more nervous because you have many competitors next to you, and the fact that there are many situations where the results cannot be guaranteed also seems to play a part in being nervous.
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