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What kind of people do you like to meet?

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In the work, I have no choice to meet people who is my style. I mean, I have to meet a lot of people there in spite of my feelings, and I need to treat them humbly and nicely.
But, personally, I like people who are humorous and polite. Firstly, humorous people make me smile, and they tend to think positively in many ways. And, I am quite humorous, so when I hang out my friends, we can laugh without reasons and we are just happy each other.
Also, when it comes to polite people, they make me comfortable. Even though they are smart and good at something such as cooking, sports, working and something like that, they have a patience for others. Therefore they lead the vibe smoothly.

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Hello, Ms. Jane! I also think those are the kinds of people who are the best to be around. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
In the work, I have no choice to meet people who is my style.
>>At work, I have no choice on what kinds of people I meet.
I mean, I have to meet a lot of people there in spite of my feelings, and I need to treat them humbly and nicely.
>>I mean, I have to meet a lot of people regardless of how I feel, and I need to treat them humbly and nicely.
But, personally, I like people who are humorous and polite. 
>>CORRECT.
Firstly, humorous people make me smile, and they tend to think positively in many ways. 
>>First, humorous people make me smile and they are optimistic in every situation.
And, I am quite humorous, so when I hang out my friends, we can laugh without reasons and we are just happy each other.
>>And, I am quite humorous, too, so when I hangout with my friends, we can laugh without any reason and we are just happy with each other.
Also, when it comes to polite people, they make me comfortable. 
>>With polite people, they make me comfortable.
Even though they are smart and good at something such as cooking, sports, working and something like that, they have a patience for others.
>>Apart from being smart and good at something such as cooking, sports, or working, they also have patience for others.
Therefore they lead the vibe smoothly.
>>Therefore, they create a smooth vibe.
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