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Do you think Korean meals are healthy? Why or why not?

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Yes, I think Korean meals are healthier than meals from other countries.
The main meal in Korea is rice.
Rice raises blood sugar less than flour.
Additionally, there are various side dishes.
Assorted side dishes contain sufficient nutrients.

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Hi, MK!
I couldn't agree more! Side dishes in Korea are various and most of the time, are vegetables, so we really think it's healthy since it balances the main dish and provides a more balanced diet.
- T. Caitlyn
Yes, I think Korean meals are healthier than meals from other countries.
>> CORRECT
The main meal in Korea is rice.
>> CORRECT
Rice raises blood sugar less than flour.
>> CORRECT
Additionally, there are various side dishes.
>> CORRECT
Assorted side dishes contain sufficient nutrients.
>> CORRECT
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