¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Share a personality trait that you have acquired through the influence of a friend.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¾È*À±
2024-06-25 2428

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

The biggest influence was from my husband, which is my best friend.
I am kind of living a fast life, and I like things to be planned and I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something I expected.
However, he do something no plan suddenly with a concentration and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
This makes me feel like it is okay even if I don't struggle over things too much, and I could have a more broad-minded personality.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Ms. Anna! It sounds like your husband brings a refreshing perspective to your life! It's great that his approach helps you feel more relaxed and broad-minded. Finding that balance can be so valuable.
~T. Jenna

The biggest influence was from my husband, which is my best friend.
>>
The biggest influence was from my husband, who is my best friend.
OR
>>My husband, who is also my best friend, has had the greatest impact on me.
I am kind of living a fast life, and I like things to be planned and I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something I expected.
>>I live a fast-paced life, and I prefer things to be planned, so I get stressed when I cannot accomplish something as expected.
OR
>>I lead a fast-paced life and prefer to have everything mapped out, so when things don't go according to plan, it can really throw me off.
However, he do something no plan suddenly with a concentration and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
>>However, he does something unplanned suddenly, with concentration, and doesn't get stressed over almost anything.
OR
>>However, he often flies by the seat of his pants, tackling tasks spontaneously with laser focus, and remains cool as a cucumber under pressure.
This makes me feel like it is okay even if I don't struggle over things too much, and I could have a more broad-minded personality.
Correct, or
>>This makes me feel it's alright not to struggle too much, and it encourages me to cultivate a more broad-minded personality.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
137782 Knowledge is Power!!!!!!!!!!!!!! À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 1908
137781 How do you support others in their goals? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 1830
137780 This is because everyone has different environments and... À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2010
137779 June 10th homework ¾È*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 1955
137778 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 0
137777 Hobbies reduce our stress and help us feel happy. À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2006
137776 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2189
137775 I\'m satisfied with my life now À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2478
137774 My bad habits ÇÑ*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 15
137773 Modern communication tools ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2428
137772 HOMEWORK DAY 2 ±è*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2846
137771 Do you think it\'s smart to complain or get angry at someone who... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2
137770 homework ÀÌ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 1920
137769 What can you say about the current Ma Dong-seok movie titled... ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 1906
137768 Share your movie review of the most recent movie you have seen ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2221
137767 What is the difference between friendship and \'kinship\' (blood... Ȳ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2255
137766 What are some traditional party games in your country? ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2610
137765 HOMEWORK Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2633
137764 The important thing when buying something À±*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2133
137763 No need for charity? ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-06-12 2519

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04