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\"Every cloud has a silver lining\" is a popular old saying. Does this apply to your life?

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No one else knows, but I believe every cloud has a silver lining and I think it applies to our lives as well.
However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before out eyes.
I think we can meet early by working hard with hope, or we can meet a little late while doing our own work silently.
Also, because there is a word miracle, I think people can meet silver lining like a miracle in their life.
To be honest, living without any hope is like walking on a limitless dark path that has no end and will be hard to endure hard work and pain.
I also remember these words when things don't work out, when something upset happens, and prepare for the next step to meet my silver lining that I will meet someday.
If we continue to prepare, won't my sliver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet silver lining someday?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!~
In that idiomatic phrase, the "silver lining" represents hope in an otherwise terrible circumstance. I also agree that we should put it into practice in our daily lives. Silver Lining gives us motivation to keep going even in the face of obstacles. :))
Chammy
No one else knows, but I believe every cloud has a silver lining and I think it applies to our lives as well.
>> Correct 
However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before out eyes.
>>However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before our eyes.
I think we can meet early by working hard with hope, or we can meet a little late while doing our own work silently.
Also, because there is a word miracle, I think people can meet silver lining like a miracle in their life.
To be honest, living without any hope is like walking on a limitless dark path that has no end and will be hard to endure hard work and pain.
I also remember these words when things don't work out when something upset happens, and prepare for the next step to meet my silver lining that I will meet someday.
>> Correct 
If we continue to prepare, won't my sliver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet silver lining someday?
>> If we continue to prepare, won't my silver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet the silver lining someday?
OR
>> When we encounter the silver lining eventually, won't my silver lining shine even brighter if we keep preparing?
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