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What are some reasons why people enjoy watching romantic movies?

작성자: 박*호
2024-07-04 2575

회원님의 영작문

I think the reason people enjoy watching romantic movies is because they remind them of memories from their past or because they hope to become the main characters in those movies.
I explain more details about that.
Everyone has beautiful memories of love when they were young.
When people watch romantic movies, they think of their own beautiful love stories.
And in romantic movies, beautiful, dramatic, and seemingly impossible love stories unfold.
When people watch those movies, they seem to like it because they can experience it indirectly as if they were the main characters of those movies.
Because anything is possible in movies.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Goodmorning, Sun! 

People enjoy watching romantic movies because they provide a blend of escapism into idealized love stories, evoke strong emotions that resonate with personal experiences or aspirations, and reinforce beliefs in the enduring power of love. These films offer a form of entertainment that is both heartwarming and relatable, often inspiring viewers with themes of hope, connection, and the possibility of finding happiness through relationships.


- Kristine ^^ 


I think the reason people enjoy watching romantic movies is because they remind them of memories from their past or because they hope to become the main characters in those movies.

>> I believe that the reason why people love romantic films is either because they bring back memories from their own lives or because they aspire to play the lead roles in such films.
I explain more details about that.

>> I go into further depth about that.
Everyone has beautiful memories of love when they were young.

>> Everybody has lovely childhood memories of being in love.
When people watch romantic movies, they think of their own beautiful love stories.

>> People imagine their own beautiful love stories when they watch romantic films.
And in romantic movies, beautiful, dramatic, and seemingly impossible love stories unfold.

>> Beautiful, dramatic, and seemingly impossible love stories also play out in romantic films.
When people watch those movies, they seem to like it because they can experience it indirectly as if they were the main characters of those movies.

>> People who watch those movies tend to enjoy it because it allows them to feel as though they are the main characters in an indirect way.
Because anything is possible in movies.

>> Because in movies, everything is possible.

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