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HOMEWORK:
Should skin color be part of the hiring process in a company?

There is no need for that.

Skin color is no longer a determining factor.

Regardless of the color of your skin, whether you're in the company or society, you should prioritize your ability.

In addition, in society, love, emotion, and reason between people must be properly harmonized, especially.

Skin color doesn't matter.

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Hello Mr. Lee!
Wow, thank you for constructing the correct sentences.
Nowadays, skin color is no longer part of the hiring process, however, Traditional companies in America, still consider this " secretly" especially for Asians. We need to be vigilant. 
T. Aki~


There is no need for that
>>> CORRECT!

Skin color is no longer a determining factor.
>>> CORRECT!

Regardless of the color of your skin, whether you're in the company or society, you should prioritize your ability.
>>> CORRECT!

In addition, in society, love, emotion, and reason between people must be properly harmonized, especially.
>>> CORRECT!

Skin color doesn't matter.
>>> CORRECT!
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