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Adventage and disadventage of my generation

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Adventages of my gengeration is experiance. I think we are don`t know everthing that happens around us. But we have been taken most events or happens. We know how to deal with the happens and have wisdom as getting old.

Disadvantage is weakness with getting old. We are easly lost memory. Nevertherless i have cellphone in hand, i have been looked for my cellphone around my house. These day, i take a vivamin to hlep memorize. If i have more serious problem for memorize, i`ll go to medical center. but because of not serious situation, I`m not worry about my memorize.

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Hello, Tom!
Being forgetful is a sign of aging. Taking vitamins is good for you. :) Even at my age, I easily forget things. I guess it also depends on our lifestyles.
~ Trixia

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Adventages of my gengeration is experiance.

- The advantage of my generation is experience.

I think we are don`t know everthing that happens around us. But we have been taken most events or happens.

- I think we don't know everything that happens around us, but we have taken most events that happened.

We know how to deal with the happens and have wisdom as getting old.

- We know how to deal with what happens and have wisdom as we get older.

Disadvantage is weakness with getting old.

- The disadvantage is weakness with getting old.

We are easly lost memory.

- We have easily lost our memory.

Nevertherless i have cellphone in hand, i have been looked for my cellphone around my house.

- For example, when I have a cellphone in hand, I look for it around my house.

These day, i take a vivamin to hlep memorize.

- These days, I take a vitamin to have a good memory.

If i have more serious problem for memorize, i`ll go to medical center. but because of not serious situation, I`m not worry about my memorize.

- If I have a more serious memory problem, I'll go to the medical center, but because of the not-so-serious situation, I'm not worried about my memory.

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