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i'd like to visit sports stadium like soccer field or baseball ground. one of my favorite thing is sports. and all of sports need places that can activities. in fact, let's see with the government eyes. the stadium condition is not the first step of officer. it is 2nd thing in policy. so many country willing to spend money to the stadium.
but do you know 'colosseum' or 'panathinaiko'? it is the ancient remains related sports of italy and greece. lots of ancient people did sports at there. it means the flourish country at that momont had great stadium. todays, according to 'ranking of the most high value stadium in the world', 1st to 5th are all in the united states.
so I want to visit the stadium and experience the new world

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Hello, Mr. Sammy! I have heard about the 'Colosseum' but the information that you've shared were new discoveries for me. Thank you for sharing and rooting for your stadium tours to come soon! 
-T. Sonny 
i'd like to visit sports stadium like soccer field or baseball ground. 
>>I'd like to visit sports stadiums like a soccer field or a baseball ground.
one of my favorite thing is sports. 
>>One of my favorite things is sports.
and all of sports need places that can activities. 
>>And all sports need places where they can do the activities.
in fact, let's see with the government eyes. 
>>In fact, let's look at the government's perspective.
the stadium condition is not the first step of officer. 
>>The stadium's condition is not the first thing they consider.
it is 2nd thing in policy. 
>>It is the second to policy.
so many country willing to spend money to the stadium.
>>So, many countries are willing to spend money on the stadium.
but do you know 'colosseum' or 'panathinaiko'? 
>>CORRECT. 
OR. But, have you heard of 'Colosseum' or 'Panathinaiko'?
it is the ancient remains related sports of italy and greece. 
>>It is an ancient structure that is related to the sports of Italy and Greece.
lots of ancient people did sports at there. 
>>It hosted a lot of sports events for the Roman people.
it means the flourish country at that momont had great stadium. 
>>It means that a flourishing country that time had a great stadium.
todays, according to 'ranking of the most high value stadium in the world', 1st to 5th are all in the united states.
>>These days, according to the 'ranking of highest valued stadiums in the word', the stadiums from 1st to 5th are all in the United States.
so I want to visit the stadium and experience the new world
>>So I want to visit those stadiums and experience the new world.
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