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Describe a memorable experience you had with your friends.

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2024-07-24 1917

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There were so many memorable experiences that I had with my friends.
I and my high school friends went to Jeju island for a vacation 10 years ago. It was our first trip by a car. Only one of us had a driver¡¯s license at that time but she was also not used to drive yet. We rented a car and she drove it. Including her, we were all anxious while she drove! One of us should have looked around and others should have kept quite while driving. We couldn¡¯t even listen to music! Haha. However, it was very memorable for us and we spent very enjoyable time. Even though we are all able to drive now, we sometimes reminisce about that time and miss that time!

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Hi Yura! This was such a memorable experience. Spending time with our friends like this is something we'll always cherish. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
There were so many memorable experiences that I had with my friends.
>>CORRECT
I and my high school friends went to Jeju island for a vacation 10 years ago.
>>CORRECT
It was our first trip by a car.
>>CORRECT
Only one of us had a driver¡¯s license at that time but she was also not used to drive yet.
>>Only one of us had a driver¡¯s license at that time, but she was also not used to driving yet.
We rented a car and she drove it. Including her, we were all anxious while she drove!
>>We rented a car, and she drove it. Including her, we were all anxious while she was driving!
One of us should have looked around and others should have kept quite while driving.
>>One of us should have looked around, and others should have kept quiet while driving.
 We couldn¡¯t even listen to music! Haha. 
>>CORRECT
However, it was very memorable for us and we spent very enjoyable time.
>>However, it was a very memorable experience for us, and we had a very enjoyable time.
Even though we are all able to drive now, we sometimes reminisce about that time and miss that time!
>>Even though we are all able to drive now, we sometimes reminisce about that time and miss it!
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