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2. DESCRIBE THE CURRENT PRESIDENT OF SOUTH KOREA.
People call the President incompetent. He is called shameful man because his wife is troublemaker. Those who really know him call him be ignorant of the world
I guess we can call him not a politician

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Hi, Ms. Nami! Thank you for this opinion. Politics will always be a stressful topic. We all have divided opinions about politicians. I appreciate your honest opinion on this. See you again soon!
--Teacher Anji


People call the President incompetent. 
>>CORRECT
He is called shameful man because his wife is troublemaker. 
>> He is called a shameful man because his wife is a troublemaker. 
Those who really know him call him be ignorant of the world.
>> Those who really know him call him ignorant of the world.
I guess we can call him not a politician.
OR >> I guess we can not call him a politician.
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