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What emotions do you think the Taj Mahal evokes in people who visit it?

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Although I have not been to the Taj Mahal, I already knew a little bit about it because it is so famous, and I got to know a lot of new facts while preparing for English class today.
Therefore, I feel as if I have been to the Taj Mahal.
More than anything, I was amazed at the fact that the emperor was able to build such a beautiful mausoleum for the only person he loved.
It is said that the emperor and empress loved each other so much that they had as many as 14 children.
It is said that the Taj Mahal was built over 22 years by investing a large amount of money that would have bankrupted the national finances and mobilizing the best architects of the time.
Of course, it is said that he was kicked out of the throne by his son due to public unrest due to unreasonable construction, but his extreme and eternal love for his wife should not be underestimated.
I want to go to the Taj Mahal with the person I really love and pledge our love to each other.

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Good morning, Sun! 

Visitors might also feel a sense of tranquility and peace, as the Taj Mahal's symmetrical gardens and reflective pools contribute to a calming atmosphere. For some, there might be a touch of melancholy or reflection, given that it's a mausoleum built in memory of a loved one. The emotional impact can vary depending on personal experiences, cultural background, and individual perspectives, but the beauty and historical significance of the Taj Mahal generally leave a lasting impression on all who see it.

- Kristine ^^ 

Although I have not been to the Taj Mahal, I already knew a little bit about it because it is so famous, and I got to know a lot of new facts while preparing for English class today.
>> Although I haven't been to the Taj Mahal, I already knew a little bit about it because it's so famous, and I learned a lot of new facts while preparing for English class today.
Therefore, I feel as if I have been to the Taj Mahal.
>> Correct.
More than anything, I was amazed at the fact that the emperor was able to build such a beautiful mausoleum for the only person he loved.
>> Correct.
It is said that the emperor and empress loved each other so much that they had as many as 14 children.
>> The emperor and empress had 14 children because of their deep affection for one another.
It is said that the Taj Mahal was built over 22 years by investing a large amount of money that would have bankrupted the national finances and mobilizing the best architects of the time.
>> According to legend, the Taj Mahal took 22 years to build, requiring significant financial investments that would have forced the country's finances into bankruptcy and the involvement of the greatest architects of the day.
Of course, it is said that he was kicked out of the throne by his son due to public unrest due to unreasonable construction, but his extreme and eternal love for his wife should not be underestimated.
>> Of course, it is said that his son forced him off the throne because of unjust construction, but one should never undervalue his unwavering and deep affection for his wife.
I want to go to the Taj Mahal with the person I really love and pledge our love to each other.
>> My dream is to visit the Taj Mahal with my true love and make a pledge of our love.
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