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The best way to give up smoking

작성자: 김*수
2024-08-06 2372

회원님의 영작문

I was smoking for 5 years 20years ago. At that time, I feeled uncomportable my throat every morning at get up. I worried about my health in mind, I had heard that a famous comedian who is he announced get lung cancer. After few month later, He pasaed away. That happening was motived what i quit to smoke.

I was addicted to nicotin of cigarette. I feeled to smoke again. If I know that quit smoking patch is being. I`ll get help with it. But i didn`t know being that, i just suppressed to smoke. I smoked few times after quit smoke. It was hard time. To advise a friends who wants to quit smoke. I would say that get help quit smoking patch is best way and fast way to quit smoke.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Tom!
It is never easy to get rid of something we've gotten used to doing. 
~ Trixia

Content:

I was smoking for 5 years 20years ago.

- I was smoking for 5 years, 20 years ago.

At that time, I feeled uncomportable my throat every morning at get up.

- At that time, I felt uncomfortable in my throat every morning when I got up.

I worried about my health in mind, 

- I was worried about my health.

I had heard that a famous comedian who is he announced get lung cancer.

- I had heard that a famous comedian had lung cancer.

After few month later, He pasaed away.

- A few months later, he passed away.

That happening was motived what i quit to smoke.

- That event was my motivation to quit smoking.
I was addicted to nicotin of cigarette.

- I was addicted to the nicotine in cigarettes.

I feeled to smoke again.

- I felt compelled to smoke again.

If I know that quit smoking patch is being. I`ll get help with it.

- If I had known that the quit smoking patch was being used, I'd get help with it.

But i didn`t know being that, i just suppressed to smoke.

- But I didn't know that, so I just suppressed my desire to smoke.

I smoked few times after quit smoke.

- I smoked a few times after quitting.

It was hard time.

- It was a hard time.

To advise a friends who wants to quit smoke. I would say that get help quit smoking patch is best way and fast way to quit smoke.

- To advise a friend who wants to quit smoking, I would say that getting help to quit smoking patches is the best and fastest way to quit smoking.

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