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How do you overcome nervousness?
>>> I usually talk about the thing that brings me nervousness with my friends or family. By talking about it, I can lower my nervous. It is similar when I'm sad or angry. But when the thing that makes me sad or nervous is bigger than expected, I have to sleep. sleeping helps me relax myself.
Sometimes I exercise to overcome nervousness. Because exercising is energetic and hard not enough to think other thinkings, It is possible to forget nervous. Although it is short time, forgeting makes greater effect. I recommend it.

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Hello, Jun!~
Thank you for finishing your composition again. I understand you were busy the past few days, which is why you didn't complete the other compositions. Regardless, keep doing good homework ^^.
Chammy

 I usually talk about the thing that brings me nervousness with my friends or family.
>> Correct
 By talking about it, I can lower my nervous.
>> By talking about it, I can lower my nervousness.
OR
>> Talking about it makes me feel less nervous.
 It is similar when I'm sad or angry.
>>  It is similar to when I'm sad or angry.
 But when the thing that makes me sad or nervous is bigger than expected, I have to sleep. sleeping helps me relax myself.
>>But when the thing that makes me sad or nervous is bigger than expected, I have to sleep. Sleeping helps me relax.
Sometimes I exercise to overcome nervousness.
>> Correct
 Because exercising is energetic and hard not enough to think other thinkings,
>> Because exercise is energetic and difficult, not enough for reflecting on other thoughts.
 It is possible to forget nervous. Although it is short time, forgeting makes greater effect. I recommend it.
>>  It is possible to forget nervousness. Although it is a short time, forgetting has a greater effect. I recommend it.
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