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8/12(Mon) homework

작성자: 김*희
2024-08-12 1630

회원님의 영작문

Thank you very much T. Jeny.
I am happy today with you. I haven't studied English for a while, so my tongue feels stiff.
Often I can't think of the English word I want to say.
I means I need to study harder from now.
I will give up.

1. I waited for her until she comes.
2. As he was not there, I spoke to her mother.
3. They sold the house because it was old.
4. I asked him what his name is.
5. He works hard that he is certain to succeed.
6. Wherever he preached the people gathered to listen.
7. He ran because he was in a hurry.
8. His health has improved since he returned from the hills.
9. As soon as he heard the news, he wrote to me.
10. Whenever we meet we talk of old times.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Nicole!

Do whatever makes you happy. Have fun while the weather is pretty good. See you again!

-Teacher Jeny-


Thank you very much T. Jeny.
>>correct
I am happy today with you. 
>>I was happy with you today.
I haven't studied English for a while, so my tongue feels stiff.
>>correct
Often I can't think of the English word I want to say.
>>Often, I think of the English word that I wanted to say.
I means I need to study harder from now.
>>It means I need to study harder from now.
I will give up.

>>I will never give up.
1. I waited for her until she comes.
>>I waited for her until she came.
2. As he was not there, I spoke to her mother.
>>correct
3. They sold the house because it was old.
>>correct
4. I asked him what his name is.
>>I asked him what his name was.
5. He works hard that he is certain to succeed.
>>correct
6. Wherever he preached the people gathered to listen.
>>correct
7. He ran because he was in a hurry.
>>correct
8. His health has improved since he returned from the hills.
>>correct
9. As soon as he heard the news, he wrote to me.
>>correct
10. Whenever we meet we talk of old times.
>>correct
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