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Have you ever worked in a place where you felt unhappy or stressed? What were the reasons?

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When I was goverment employee, I did many kinds of work. What I didn't liked is works of have problems. Much more this problems could't solve. Under this sisuation, I felt unhappy and got stressed. I tryed for solved problems, but it was not easy. Sometime there were cases it worked out very well. I thought that heaven helps those who help themselves.

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Hi Eva,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It sounds like dealing with unsolvable problems was very stressful and made you unhappy. It's understandable to feel this way when you¡¯re working hard but not seeing results. It's great that you tried to solve these problems even when it was tough. Remember, facing challenges and finding solutions, even in difficult situations, shows your dedication and resilience. Keep believing in your efforts and the positive impact they can have.

~Teacher Cathy

 

When I was goverment employee, I did many kinds of work.

>>When I was a government employee, I did many kinds of work.

What I didn't liked is works of have problems.

>>What I didn't like was dealing with problematic tasks.

Much more this problems could't solve.

>>Many of these problems couldn't be solved.

Under this sisuation, I felt unhappy and got stressed.

>>In this situation, I felt unhappy and stressed.

I tryed for solved problems, but it was not easy.

>>I tried to solve the problems, but it was not easy.

Sometime there were cases it worked out very well. I thought that heaven helps those who help themselves.

>>Sometimes there were cases where things worked out very well. I thought that heaven helps those who help themselves.

 

 

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