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MY ROOM

작성자: 김*일
2024-08-22 2572

회원님의 영작문

I am currently living in a dorm. therefore, i think i would have to say that my home is located in university. as you know, my place is owned by the school, so i cannot make the interior's change by myself. what i am trying to talk about is that my room's interior is quite plain. moreover, it is so cramped that there isn't enough room to move around. because of that, sometimes i feel like i am stuck in a rabbit hutch. however, none of them really matters to me, cuz i can do whatever i feel like. considering i am currently a student, i don't have that much money. compared to renting a studio apartment, living in a dorm is much cheaper. i mean, it's truly affordable. it really make my wallet easy. i hope i can stay here until my graduation ceremony.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gilbert!
Thank you for telling me about your room. Great job with the sentence structures. Just take note of the minor corrections we've made.
- T. Caitlyn
I am currently living in a dorm. 
>> CORRECT
therefore, i think i would have to say that my home is located in university. 
>> Therefore, I think I would have to say that my home is located on the university campus.
as you know, my place is owned by the school, so i cannot make the interior's change by myself. 
>> As you know, my place is owned by the school, so I cannot make any changes to the interior myself.
what i am trying to talk about is that my room's interior is quite plain. 
>> What I’m trying to say is that the interior of my room is quite plain.
moreover, it is so cramped that there isn't enough room to move around. 
>> CORRECT
because of that, sometimes i feel like i am stuck in a rabbit hutch. 
>> CORRECT
however, none of them really matters to me, cuz i can do whatever i feel like. 
>> However, none of that really matters to me because I can do whatever I feel like.
considering i am currently a student, i don't have that much money. 
>> CORRECT
compared to renting a studio apartment, living in a dorm is much cheaper. 
>> CORRECT
i mean, it's truly affordable. 
>> CORRECT
it really make my wallet easy. 
>> It really makes things easier on my wallet.
i hope i can stay here until my graduation ceremony.
>> CORRECT
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