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About my friends

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I have many friends. And some friends are funny, kind, or good. And many people have each's best friend. I have best friend too. Today, I introduce my best friend. I met my friend last year. I met him in my classroom. He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other. And he and I also like same E sports team, T1. And before that time every day we play together. And this time, I played game with my friend too. I think friend is very greatful thing.

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Hello, John! Thank you for introducing your best friend to me. I hope your friendship lasts for a long time! 
-T. Sonny
I have many friends. 
>>Correct!
And some friends are funny, kind, or good. 
>>Some of them are funny, kind, or good.
And many people have each's best friend. 
>>Many of us have our own bestfriend.
I have best friend too. 
>>I have a best friend, too.
Today, I introduce my best friend. 
>>Today, I will tell you about my bestfriend.
I met my friend last year. 
>>I met him last year.
I met him in my classroom. 
>>We first met in our classroom.
He and I also love League of Lengends, and we now each other. 
>>We both love League of Legends and we know each other.
And he and I also like same E sports team, T1. 
>>We also like the same E-sports team called T1.
And before that time every day we play together. 
>>Before that time, we played together everyday.
And this time, I played game with my friend too. 
>>And currently, we play games together, too.
I think friend is very greatful thing.
>>I think, having a friend is a great thing.
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