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The positive side of \"Is history as a subject in school needed?\"

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Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Is history as a subject in school needed?". I think history is as a subject in school needed because of these reasons.
First, we can contemplate our life or learning new vital knowledge by learning history. From my experience, I got to know democracy by learning the French Revolution and Government Organization of the Republic of Korea.
Second, our overall thinking decision can change when we learn history. Actually, I have a debate class named "Korean history Debate Class". When I talk about some social issues based on interesting historical topic, I can make a right position of thinking.
In conclusion, I know there are some people who hate history, but history is fascinating study! If you learn about history deeply, you will get to know why I'm energetic of history.

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Hi, Hana! Thank you for your relevant insights. Your ideas are valuable and meaningful. I like how you present your opinions. Let us discuss again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji



Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Is history as a subject in school needed?". I think history is as a subject in school needed because of these reasons.
Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Is history as a subject in school needed?" I think history is needed as a subject in school for these reasons.
First, we can contemplate our life or learning new vital knowledge by learning history. From my experience, I got to know democracy by learning the French Revolution and Government Organization of the Republic of Korea.
First, we can contemplate our lives or learn vital knowledge by studying history. From my experience, I got to know about democracy by learning about the French Revolution and the Government Organization of the Republic of Korea.
Second, our overall thinking decision can change when we learn history.
Second, our overall decision-making can change when we learn history.
Actually, I have a debate class named "Korean history Debate Class". When I talk about some social issues based on interesting historical topic, I can make a right position of thinking.
 Actually, I have a debate class called "Korean History Debate Class." When I discuss social issues based on interesting historical topics, I can develop a correct way of thinking.
In conclusion, I know there are some people who hate history, but history is fascinating study! If you learn about history deeply, you will get to know why I'm energetic of history.

In conclusion, I know there are some people who dislike history, but history is a fascinating subject! If you study history deeply, you will understand why I'm so passionate about it.

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