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The negative side of \" Should public libraries be allowed to have a list of banned books? \"

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Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Should public libraries be allowed to have a list of banned books?" I think public libraries should be allowed to have a list of banned books for these reasons.
First, public libraries are not kindergarten but just libraries where we can share lots of opinions from reading books. I little agreed that banned books have some bad contents in it and they are bad at children. However, public libraries are not the place for children. Adults have a right to read and know various idea.
Second, we should waste the stereotype of banned books. Of course, some banned books have bad contents but not all banned books have them. It can be valuable book to someone.

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Hi, Hana! Thank you for this valuable insight. I agree with your opinion. It depends on the guardian to check what their young children are reading. Let us share opinions again soon. See you!

--teacher Anji

Hello, I'm Hana, and I'd like to present my opinion on the topic, "Should public libraries be allowed to have a list of banned books?"
>> CORRECT
I think public libraries should be allowed to have a list of banned books for these reasons.
>> CORRECT
First, public libraries are not kindergarten but just libraries where we can share lots of opinions from reading books.
First, public libraries are not kindergartens, but places where we can share a variety of opinions from reading books.
I little agreed that banned books have some bad contents in it and they are bad at children.
I somewhat agree that banned books may contain inappropriate content and can be harmful to children.
However, public libraries are not the place for children.
However, public libraries are not solely for children.
Adults have a right to read and know various idea.
Adults have the right to read and explore various ideas.
Second, we should waste the stereotype of banned books.
Second, we should challenge the stereotype of banned books.
Of course, some banned books have bad contents but not all banned books have them.
Of course, some banned books contain inappropriate content, but not all of them do.
It can be valuable book to someone.
It may be a valuable book to someone.
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