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Thank you today T. Jeny.
We talked a serious social issues today.
It was very fun and it makes me think about that.

1. We have been living in this street since 2005.
2. She returned from work.
3. I have not heard anything from her. (Use the negative form)
4. We are invited to their party. (Use the passive form)
5. She acted in a film.
6. She understood her mistake.
7. They invested in real estate.
8. We received the letter.
9. You missed a great opportunity.
10. Sushama finished working on that report.

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Hello there Nicole!


Thanks for answering you homework. 

Have a great day ahead and I'll talk to you in our next class.

~~ T. Jeny ^^


Thank you today T. Jeny.
>>correct
We talked a serious social issues today.
>>We talked about serious social issues today.
It was very fun and it makes me think about that.

>>It was really fun, and it made me think about that.
1. We have been living in this street since 2005.
>>We have lived in this street since 2005.
2. She returned from work.
>>She has returned from work.
3. I have not heard anything from her. (Use the negative form)
>>correct
4. We are invited to their party. (Use the passive form)
>>We have been invited to their party.
5. She acted in a film.
>>She has acted in a film.
6. She understood her mistake.
>> She has understood her mistake
7. They invested in real estate.
>>They have invested in real estate.
8. We received the letter.
>>We have received the letter.
9. You missed a great opportunity.
>>You have missed a great opportunity.
10. Sushama finished working on that report.
>>Sushama has finished working on that report.
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