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What are the potential challenges or issues that might arise when washing a pet at home compared to

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I don't have a dog, so I don't know much about the issues or challenges that might arise in the process of washing a dog.
From what I know, most Korean dog owners seem to wash and groom their dogs at home.
However, most Koreans live in apartments without a separate garden, so they have to raise dogs inside the house, and the number of people who want to provide special services to their dogs and spend much money is increasing, so more and more people are looking for professional dog groomers.
I think that if dog owners bathe their dogs at home, the house may become messy and it may be difficult to trim the dog's fur considering the characteristics of the dog's fur.
On the other hand, professional groomers are likely to be able to provide a variety of services taking into account the various characteristics of dogs.
I think that, just as people, especially women, go to hair salons to get their hair trimmed, in the future, most dogs will have their fur trimmed by professional groomers.

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Hey there, Sun! 

I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your thoughts. Keep it up!

- Kristine ^^ 

I don't have a dog, so I don't know much about the issues or challenges that might arise in the process of washing a dog.
>> Since I don't own a dog, I'm not too familiar with issues or challenges that could occur when washing a dog.
From what I know, most Korean dog owners seem to wash and groom their dogs at home.
>> I understand that most Korean dog owners seem to bathe and trim their pets at home.
However, most Koreans live in apartments without a separate garden, so they have to raise dogs inside the house, and the number of people who want to provide special services to their dogs and spend much money is increasing, so more and more people are looking for professional dog groomers.
>> In Korea, where most people live in apartments without separate gardens, many are raising dogs indoors. As a result, there's a growing demand for specialized dog services, and more individuals are seeking professional dog groomers.
I think that if dog owners bathe their dogs at home, the house may become messy and it may be difficult to trim the dog's fur considering the characteristics of the dog's fur.
>> I believe that bathing dogs at home can make the house messy and that trimming a dog's fur can be challenging due to its specific characteristics.
On the other hand, professional groomers are likely to be able to provide a variety of services taking into account the various characteristics of dogs.
>> On the other hand, professional groomers are better equipped to offer a range of services tailored to the unique characteristics of different dogs.
I think that, just as people, especially women, go to hair salons to get their hair trimmed, in the future, most dogs will have their fur trimmed by professional groomers.
>> I believe that, much like how people, especially women, visit hair salons for haircuts, most dogs will increasingly have their fur trimmed by professional groomers in the future.
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