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How much reliable tour information in social media?

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2024-09-07 1950

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I think the we can trust about half tour information in social media.
Because it is difficult for us to distinguish between the real experiences of travelers and the advertisements.
Also we may not be impressed by the tour attractions or the restaurants which many people recommend on SNS.

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Hello there again, Min!

You are right. We can only believe half the truth in terms of information gathered on social media. When it comes to the attractions and sceneries, it could be above 50 percent. Regarding food and accommodation, they may be paid to advertise hence, as many say, to see is to believe!

Since beauty is subjective and a matter of personal taste, social media reviews can be tricky. Nevertheless, we can find those videos that resonate with our own preferences and styles.

You did very well on this homework answer. Some underlines words or marks can help you be better in grammar. 

See you on your next homework!

-T. Donna~

I think the we can trust about half tour information in social media.
>> I think the we can trust about half of the tour information in social media.

Because it is difficult for us to distinguish between the real experiences of travelers and the advertisements.
>> Correct!
Or: It is difficult for us to distinguish between the real experiences of travelers and the advertisements.

Also we may not be impressed by the tour attractions or the restaurants which many people recommend on SNS.
>> Correct!
Or: Also, we may not be impressed by the tour attractions or the restaurants which many people recommend on SNS.
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