¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

In what cases does the expulsion of students happen in your university?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*°æ
2024-09-30 2444

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

There can be some cases of expulsion in our college, just off top of my head.
First, if they commit a crime, they can be expelled out of school because they become a criminal whom the school needs to separate from others.
Second, if they get points under the lowest standard which the school think is bare minimum. if students fail to meet the lowest points in the class, they have to take the responsibility as students.
Lastly, if they lose the purpose to study the college, they don¡¯t need to extend their staying the college with lots of tuition. If they don¡¯t do anything the school can expel them, it is better for students to leave and go somewhere else they can spend their youth more preciously. Unfortunately, I think there are many college students don't have concrete goals to attend the school or passion to do after graduation. I attribute this unhappy reality to Korean competitive education system where they had grown. I hope we can have system where students can be passionate.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good day, Yeong!
You know, people are different in every situation they are in. Expulsion is one of the worst punishments a student can get due to violations and no school would like to carry out such harsh punishment. However, without such a policy, the school may fall into chaos.
Thanks for this! 
Aki~
 
There can be some cases of expulsion in our college, just off top of my head.
>>> There can be some cases of expulsion in our college, just off the top of my head.

First, if they commit a crime, they can be expelled out of school because they become a criminal whom the school needs to separate from others.
>>> First, if they commit a crime, they can be expelled from school because they become a criminal whom the school needs to separate from others.

Second, if they get points under the lowest standard which the school think is bare minimum. if students fail to meet the lowest points in the class, they have to take the responsibility as students.
>>> Second, if they get points under the lowest standard which the school thinks is the bare minimum. if students fail to meet the lowest points in the class, they have to take the responsibility as students.

Lastly, if they lose the purpose to study the college, they don¡¯t need to extend their staying the college with lots of tuition.
>>> Lastly, if they lose the purpose of studying the college, they don¡¯t need to extend their stay at the college with lots of tuition.

If they don¡¯t do anything the school can expel them, it is better for students to leave and go somewhere else they can spend their youth more preciously.
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >> If they don¡¯t do anything the school can expel them, students should leave and go somewhere else they can spend their youth more preciously.
 
Unfortunately, I think there are many college students don't have concrete goals to attend the school or passion to do after graduation.
>>>  Unfortunately, I think many college students don't have concrete goals to attend school or a passion to do after graduation.
 
I attribute this unhappy reality to Korean competitive education system where they had grown. I hope we can have system where students can be passionate.
>>>  I attribute this unhappy reality to the Korean competitive education system where they had grown. I hope we can have a system where students can be passionate.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
142597 Homework5 ±è* ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1192
142596 homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 2
142595 Patient Hospitalization question ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 6
142594 homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1212
142593 Memory ÀÓ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1231
142592 Why do you want study English. ÀÌ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1043
142591 When do you see a doctor? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 3
142590 The homework for Fab 17th. Á¶*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1204
142589 The creator ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 0
142588 Homework ±è*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1241
142587 Everyone prefers to look younger ÇÑ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1233
142586 It was a backpacking trip to Western Europe with my family for... ¼Û*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1
142585 Why do you think people like to listen to gossip? ÃÖ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1169
142584 What do you think of plastic surgery? ÇÑ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1081
142583 For buy-and-sell platforms like Daangn Inc., how can they ensure... ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1207
142582 How can you convince someone to stop making a bad habit? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1053
142581 What was your best travel experience so far? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1023
142580 Homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1069
142579 You talked about Filipino caregivers in Korea. If you are one of... ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1181
142578 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-02-18 1033

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04