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What are some annoying things that your friends do? How do you handle it?

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2024-09-30 1792

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The annoying things that most my friends do is maybe they're drunk because they can't beat their own drinking capacity and keep drinking.
I've never done that but because I've experienced friends case like that many times.
Especially when I was in university, I saw a lot of such friends, and I think it was me who took care of them until the end every time I did that.
Because I lived in a dormitory and I rarely drank because I didn't like alcohol.
Whenever that happened, I took a taxi to send my drunk friends after the event or returned to the dorm together.
I also called their family, boyfriend or girlfriend and told them to pick them up.
The next day, I told my friends in a strong tone not to do it agian.

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Hello, Yun!
I was smiling while reading your composition. I was trying to imagine your position/role during those times... HAHAHA... When I was in my 20's I wanted to experienced how it felt to get drunk, too. But now I thank myself for not allowing me to experience that. Hahaha~ Health is important at the end of the day... hihihi
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The annoying things that most my friends do is maybe they're drunk because they can't beat their own drinking capacity and keep drinking.
>> The annoying thing that most of my friends do is when they keep drinking excessively to beat their drinking capacity even if they can't.
I've never done that but because I've experienced friends case like that many times.
>> I've never done that but I've experienced being with friends in cases like that many times.
Especially when I was in university, I saw a lot of such friends, and I think it was me who took care of them until the end every time I did that.
>> Especially when I was at the university, I saw a lot of such friends, and I think it was me who took care of them until the end every time they did that.
Because I lived in a dormitory and I rarely drank because I didn't like alcohol.
Whenever that happened, I took a taxi to send my drunk friends after the event or returned to the dorm together.
I also called their family, boyfriend, or girlfriend and told them to pick them up.
>> Correct
The next day, I told my friends in a strong tone not to do it agian.
>> The next day, I told my friends in a strong tone not to do it again.
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