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2024-10-02 2094

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1. What volunteer work do you see yourself doing?
Previously, I went to a disabled facility with dental equipment every week for dental treatment.
But now I'm treating them in my clinic.
There are no other volunteer activities other than sponsorship with materials.

2. Who always asks favors from you?
It is my family who always asks me.
Of course I ask them a favor too.
Most of what my family asks me is material and all I ask them is advise them to move their lives in a better direction.

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Hi! I¡¯m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

1. What volunteer work do you see yourself doing?
Previously, I went to a disabled facility with dental equipment every week for dental treatment.
>> I previously visited a facility for individuals with disabilities every week to provide dental treatment. 

But now I'm treating them in my clinic.
>> Now, I am treating them at my clinic. 

There are no other volunteer activities other than sponsorship with materials.
>> Correct
OR >> Besides providing sponsorship with materials, I don't have any other volunteer activities.

2. Who always asks favors from you?
It is my family who always asks me.
>> It¡¯s my family who always asks me for help. 

Of course I ask them a favor too.
>> Of course, I ask them for favors too.

Most of what my family asks me is material and all I ask them is advise them to move their lives in a better direction.
>>  Most of what my family requests from me is material support, while all I ask of them is to advise me on how to improve my life.
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