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My motto of life

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My motto of my life is letting my life drive a steady-speed.until now Ilive with rash mind. Maybe so that I barely can acheive my work and just finish it urgently. Particularly I finished the work that I don¡¯t like to do fast and roughly. From now on, I will find the thing I want and like to do and acheive that in a calm and orderly way.

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Hi Eun Kyeong! 

Your motto gave me an eye-opener. 
We tend not to see the things that are happening as of the moment because we are so busy chasing the future. 
It would be best to actually seize the moment too. 

Andrea 

My motto of my life is letting my life drive a steady-speed.until now Ilive with rash mind. 
>> My life motto is letting my life drive a steady pace because until now, I live with a restless mind. 

Maybe so that I barely can acheive my work and just finish it urgently. 
>> Maybe this has been my motto because I can barely achieve my work and just try to finish it urgently. 

Particularly I finished the work that I don¡¯t like to do fast and roughly. 
>> I just finished the work that I do not like fast and carelessly.   

From now on, I will find the thing I want and like to do and acheive that in a calm and orderly way.
>> From now on, I will find the things that I like to do and achieve it in a calm and orderly way.  
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