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Should more people use public transport instead of cars or should more people get their own cars?

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2024-10-04 1730

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Well, I think it will depend on the situation because the situation that people are in is different.
First of all, if I think about environmental pollution, people should use public transport more. This is because own cars intensify air pollution.
Also, if people use public transport, people can keep their appointment time well and they don't have to worry about parking spaces.
However most people have their own cars.
Maybe it's because of the convenience.
This is because using a own car may take shorter time than using public transport depending on the distance.
In addition, there are areas where public transport is not developed, and it may be inconvenient to use public trasport on a limited basis.

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Hello, Yun!
In order to reduce pollution, I agree that using public transportation is the greatest option. There are frequently several cars on the road with just one person in them, which adds to the number of vehicles and creates traffic congestion. :/
Chammy
Well, I think it will depend on the situation because the situation that people are in is different.
OR
>>Since everyone is in a different situation, I believe it will depend on the circumstances.
First of all, if I think about environmental pollution, people should use public transport more. This is because own cars intensify air pollution.
Or
>>The first thing that comes to mind when considering environmental pollution is the need for more people to use public transportation. This is because owning a car increases air pollution.
Also, if people use public transport, people can keep their appointment time well and they don't have to worry about parking spaces.
However, most people have their own cars.
Maybe it's because of the convenience.
>>Correct
This is because using a own car may take shorter time than using public transport depending on the distance.
>> This is because using your own car may take a shorter time than using public transport depending on the distance.
In addition, there are areas where public transport is not developed, and it may be inconvenient to use public trasport on a limited basis.
>> In addition, there are areas where public transport is not developed, and it may be inconvenient to use public transport on a limited basis.
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