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Have you ever considered becoming a teacher? Why or why not?

>>> yes! yes! There were several times when I wanted to be a teacher.
First time was high school period. When I had to decide what I wanted to do, I come up with being a teacher because I'm good at explaining and I enjoy explaining itself.
But there was dream I wished more than teacher, it was veterinarian. So I had to abandon being a teacher because I couldn't afford to think about that.

Second time I remember was military period. Although I was majoring electronic engeening before military, I often regretted giving being a teacher up. But finally, I ended that worry.
And I decided to study harder than past.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

Have you ever considered becoming a teacher? Why or why not?

>>> yes! yes! There were several times when I wanted to be a teacher.
>>>  Yes! There were several times when I wanted to be a teacher.
First time was high school period. 
>> First time was in my high school period. 
When I had to decide what I wanted to do, I come up with being a teacher because I'm good at explaining and I enjoy explaining itself.
>> CORRECT!
But there was dream I wished more than teacher, it was veterinarian. 
>> But there was dream I wished more than teacher, it was to be a veterinarian. 
So I had to abandon being a teacher because I couldn't afford to think about that.
>> CORRECT!
Second time I remember was military period. 
>> Second time I remember was in my military period. 
Although I was majoring electronic engeening before military, I often regretted giving being a teacher up. 
>> Although I was majoring electronic engineering before military, I often regretted giving being a teacher up. 
But finally, I ended that worry.
>> CORRECT!
And I decided to study harder than the past.
>> CORRECT!

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