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Do you know some doctors who do two or more jobs in your country nowadays?

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The famous one is Chul-Soo Ahn who is a well-known politician. A few years ago, he was a candidate for the president election.
Unfortunately, he was losed in the election, and now he is one of the core member of the ruling party. Interestingly, during his early career, he founded IT company which developed virus vaccines to protect internet hacking. After having the big success as a CEO, he decided to begin another chapter of his life as a politician to heal the society.

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Hi there again, Dr. David!

With inflation s well as many socio-political issues surrounding your country in the medical field, being a doctor and pursuing another career is almost quite impossible. For the dermatologists who experience cutthroat competition, the best of the best survive.

Having a doctor in the legislative department is a good way to press on your rights, rules, and privileges as well as your duties and obligations. I hope that Dr. Chul-Soo Ahn will run again and will have all the right reasons to serve you, doctors and your country to introduce policies that will benefit the healthcare system of everyone especially the vulnerable sector.

How about you? How do you envision your second job/ work? The spa is a great idea. With careful planning, this will come true. Good luck!

Below are some of the comments and suggestions in a few words constraining the correct form of words as well all the plural form of nouns to mean a general idea. Overall, you did so well.

Catch you soon.

-T. Donna~

The famous one is Chul-Soo Ahn who is a well-known politician. A few years ago, he was a candidate for the president election.
>> The famous one is Chul-Soo Ahn who is a well-known politician. A few years ago, he was a candidate for the presidential election.

Unfortunately, he was losed in the election, and now he is one of the core member of the ruling party. Interestingly, during his early career, he founded IT company which developed virus vaccines to protect internet hacking. After having the big success as a CEO, he decided to begin another chapter of his life as a politician to heal the society.
>> Unfortunately, he lost in the election, and now he is one of the core members of the ruling party. Interestingly, during his early career, he founded an IT company which developed virus vaccines to protect internet hacking. After having the big success as a CEO, he decided to begin another chapter of his life as a politician to heal the society. Very good sentences!

 
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