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My best mentor

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회원님의 영작문

There are many people who has taught me in my life. However, I can clearly say that who has taught me a lot is my mom, and she has been the best mentor for me.
She always give me a solution and guide of my life. When I felt confused, she told me that believe yourself and you're doing well. Thanks for her cheering and belief, I could combat the majority of difficulites that I faced. It depends on everybody, but in my case, mom and me has a familiar relationship. So tips and advice that she gave me didn't become a burden.
And, in fact, she taught me contents of many subjects until I was 14 years. She is really good at mathmatics, chinese charactor. So, I could be taught that subjects thanks for her knowledge. Even though I didn't want to study and even hated 'learning mathmatic times with mom' at that time, come to think of it, it was really grateful thing. Because It's not straightforword to teach someone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Casey! We could agree that our Moms were our first teachers. They have taught us not only in academics but also in life.
-T. Sonny
There are many people who has taught me in my life. 
>>Many people who have taught me in my life. 
However, I can clearly say that who has taught me a lot is my mom, and she has been the best mentor for me.
>>However, I can clearly say that the person who has taught me a lot is my mom, and she has been my best mentor.
She always give me a solution and guide of my life. 
>>She always gives me solutions and guidance.
When I felt confused, she told me that believe yourself and you're doing well. 
>>When I feel confused, she tell me to believe in myself and that I'm doing well. 
Thanks for her cheering and belief, I could combat the majority of difficulites that I faced. 
>>Thanks to her cheer and trust, I could combat most of the difficulties I faced. 
It depends on everybody, but in my case, mom and me has a familiar relationship. 
>>It's different for everybody, but in my case, Mom and I have a close relationship. 
So tips and advice that she gave me didn't become a burden.
>>So the tips and advice that she gave me didn't become a burden.
And, in fact, she taught me contents of many subjects until I was 14 years. 
>> And, in fact, she taught me the lessons of many of my school subjects until I was 14.
She is really good at mathmatics, chinese charactor. 
>>She excels in mathematics and Chinese writing.
So, I could be taught that subjects thanks for her knowledge. 
>>So, I could learn those subjects; thanks to her knowledge.
Even though I didn't want to study and even hated 'learning mathmatic times with mom' at that time, come to think of it, it was really grateful thing. 
>>Even though, I didn't want to study and even hated learning mathematics with my mom at that time, when I think of it, I realize that it was something that I should be very grateful for.
Because It's not straightforword to teach someone.
>>It's because teaching someone is not as easy as ABC.
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