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작성자: 김*라
2024-10-18 1997

회원님의 영작문

Writing task: What is the best age to travel? Can children appreciate the experience?

answer:
I don't think there is a best age to go on a trip. I think it's more about having a healthy and mental attitude.
When I was 19years old I had a first abroad trip that time I was poor trip because I don't have money.
But I assure this is my best trip and It's still like maybe the best memory.
And my dad liked camping, so we went on a lot of family camping trips when I was young, and even though I don't know the location, I still have the good feelings and mood from that time. These experiences sometimes give me strength.
I think it's definitely good for chilren.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. Nala! It is true that even if we don't have the best and perfect travel experiences, they still become precious memories as time goes by. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I don't think there is a best age to go on a trip. 
>>Correct!
I think it's more about having a healthy and mental attitude.
>>Correct!
When I was 19years old I had a first abroad trip that time I was poor trip because I don't have money.
>>When I was 19 years old, I had my first abroad trip and at that time it was a poor experience because I didn't have money.
But I assure this is my best trip and It's still like maybe the best memory.
>>But I assure you that, that was my best trip and it still might be the most memorable.
And my dad liked camping, so we went on a lot of family camping trips when I was young, and even though I don't know the location, I still have the good feelings and mood from that time. 
>>Also, my dad liked camping, so we went on a lot of family camping trips when I was young, and even though I didn't know where we went, I still had good feelings and memories from them.
These experiences sometimes give me strength.
>>Correct!
I think it's definitely good for chilren.
>>In conclusion, I think, it is definitely good for children.

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