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Does an age difference make it difficult to be friends?

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2024-10-21 2208

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I think age difference is not important ti be friends. Of course, each person has different standards, but in my standards, the conditions for being friends are emotional bonds, preparation to understand each other, respect and respect, and joy to be together. These are not age-specific conditions. Also, even if they are the same age, it cannot be the same every time too. So if we have a heart, anyone can be a friend at any time!

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Hello, Ms. Lily! Thank you for sharing. Some people are still not open to being friends with people younger or older than them. You are correct that we all have our own preferences. 
-T. Sonny
I think age difference is not important ti be friends. 
>>I believe, age difference is not important to be friends.
Of course, each person has different standards, but in my standards, the conditions for being friends are emotional bonds, preparation to understand each other, respect and respect, and joy to be together. 
>>Of course, we all have different standards, but my conditions for being friends are the emotional bonds, mutual understanding, respect, and the joy of being together. 
These are not age-specific conditions. 
>>Correct!
Also, even if they are the same age, it cannot be the same every time too. 
>>Also, people can be of the same age but still not become friends.
So if we have a heart, anyone can be a friend at any time!
>>In conclusion, for me, as long as we have a heart, we can be friends with anyone at any time.
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