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In the neighborhood where my weekend house is located, there are 8 houses. Every neighbors moved in around the same time and we have known each other for 8 years. Among them, three houses have had a good relationship, including my husband and me. On weekends, we hold weekly gathering and spend Saturday evening drinking and chatting. The reason three houses became close is that the members enjoy farming and drinking.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
It's nice to know that you are really close with your neighbors at your second house. It's rare to find a community where you can share the same hobbies and interests and have fun at the same time!
- T. Caitlyn
In the neighborhood where my weekend house is located, there are 8 houses. 
>> CORRECT
Every neighbors moved in around the same time and we have known each other for 8 years. 
>> Every neighbor moved in around the same time, and we have known each other for 8 years
Among them, three houses have had a good relationship, including my husband and me. 
>> Among them, three households, including my husband and me, have a good relationship.
On weekends, we hold weekly gathering and spend Saturday evening drinking and chatting. 
>> On weekends, we hold weekly gatherings and spend Saturday evenings drinking and chatting.
The reason three houses became close is that the members enjoy farming and drinking.
>> CORRECT
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