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Q) Being funny requires a lot of brain work and practices, How do you ensure that you'll humor in your conversations? Do you share the same humor with your family?

A) There are a lot of people with humor who are very observant. So am I.
We need the ability to look at small actions or happening from different angles.
In order to do so, we have to read a lot of books.
Reading a lot of books means that I have to experience a lot.
Since we can't experience everything myself, we will have to experience it indirectly through books and develop our ability to see and understand the situation from a different perspective.
However, it is often difficult to share this humor with my family.
Others listen to me well even if my story is a little longer, but my family is a little short of patience.
So when the story gets a little longer, they say, "Just tell me the conclusion."
However, this story of my family is also my subject of humor.

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Hi! I¡¯m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

There are a lot of people with humor who are very observant. So am I.
>> There are many people with a good sense of humor who are also very observant, and I am one of them.

We need the ability to look at small actions or happening from different angles.
>>To develop this ability, we need to observe small actions or events from different perspectives. 

In order to do so, we have to read a lot of books.
>> CORRECT
OR >> To do this effectively, reading widely is essential. 

Reading a lot of books means that I have to experience a lot. 
Since we can't experience everything myself, we will have to experience it indirectly through books and develop our ability to see and understand the situation from a different perspective.
>> Reading allows me to experience more than I could in real life, providing indirect experiences that help me see and understand situations from various angles.

However, it is often difficult to share this humor with my family.
>> CORRECT
OR >> However, it can be challenging to share this humor with my family. 

Others listen to me well even if my story is a little longer, but my family is a little short of patience.
>> While others may listen patiently even if my stories are a bit long, my family tends to run low on patience.

So when the story gets a little longer, they say, "Just tell me the conclusion."
>> CORRECT
OR>> When my story starts to stretch out, they often say, 'Just tell me the conclusion.'

However, this story of my family is also my subject of humor.
>> Yet, even this reaction from my family becomes a source of humor for me.
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