¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you agree with the statement \"Failure is the most effective teacher\"? Why or why not?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*Èñ
2024-10-25 2180

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I thoroughly agree this statement. If I failed something, l knew that this way was wrong. So I never go this way. If I have many failure, I also have small risk. But I don't like failure. When I failed, this situation make me discourage. It is very hard overcoming. But I think that if I lose one, I can get one. We don't have to be afraid. If I have many failure, it is I have many experience. So failure is not bed.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

 Hello Eva,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the idea that "Failure is the most effective teacher." I really like how you explained that failures help you learn what not to do in the future. It's completely normal to feel down when things don't go as planned, and I appreciate your honesty about that. Your point about how losing something can lead to new opportunities is really encouraging. It shows that you understand how important it is to keep trying, even when things get tough. Remember, each failure can teach you something valuable. Keep pushing forward, and don't be afraid to embrace those challenges!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I thoroughly agree this statement.

>>I thoroughly agree with this statement.

If I failed something, l knew that this way was wrong.

>>If I fail something, I'll know that this path is wrong.

So I never go this way.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So I never take this route.

If I have many failure, I also have small risk.

>>If I experience many failures, I also take small risks.

But I don't like failure.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I don't like failing.

When I failed, this situation make me discourage.

>>If I fail, I will be discouraged about this situation.

It is very hard overcoming.

>>It's very hard to overcome.

But I think that if I lose one, I can get one.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I believe that we lose some and we gain some.

We don't have to be afraid.

>>CORRECT

OR>>There's no reason for us to be scared.

If I have many failure, it is I have many experience.

>>If I have many failures, it means I have gained a lot of experience.

So failure is not bed.

>>So failure is not bad.

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
141939 What do you think is the most dangerous mode of transport? How... ¼­*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1
141938 familly\'s relationship ÇÑ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1703
141937 What kind of appointments do you have most often? How long do... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1452
141936 Do you have any friends from a culture or country different from... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1748
141935 13 ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1637
141934 What is more important to care for mental or physical health? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1725
141933 Do you like going to crowded places? Why or why not? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1796
141932 Homework5 ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1509
141931 Have you tried feeding a giraffe? À¯*ºó ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1598
141930 16 ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1450
141929 What are the disadvantages of touchscreens? ÀÓ*½Ç ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1554
141928 Homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1422
141927 Homework & Question ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1562
141926 Who is the most adventurous person in your family? ÀÌ*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 2
141925 What do you love most about your family? ÀÌ*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2025-01-13 1
141924 Do you like to try new dishes when eating out, or do you stick... ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-12 1645
141923 How do you deal with homesickness after moving to a new place? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-12 2
141922 Page 35 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-01-12 1
141921 What are some common mistakes people make when moving in? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-12 1
141920 What is a good neighbor for you? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-01-12 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04