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Hi teacher, Divina.
Thank you for giving me homework.
Teacher I have questions , I thinke it that My studying way is wrong , How can you recommend me the ways of the studying ?
Homework
How can you support yourself when you go to Canada?
My answer
When I go to Canada, I always will exercise and study English .
I talk to other country people to adapt myself. and I'd like to play soccer with other people.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework. I think you're just doing fine in learning English because I can see your progress every time we have our class.
You just need to add more to your routine, like reading some English books, watching some English shows, and listening to English songs.
If you do these and there are some words that you don't understand, write them down and search for their meaning. After, use them in sentences.

There is no shortcut to learning the language. Just remember that if you really want to learn, then you just have to keep going. :)


~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. Teacher I have questions , I thinke it that My studying way is wrong , How can you recommend me the ways of the studying ?
>>Teacher, I have questions. I think that my way of studying is wrong. Can you recommend some tips on how I can study?

2. When I go to Canada, I always will exercise and study English .
>>When I go to Canada, I will always exercise and study English.

3. I talk to other country people to adapt myself. and I'd like to play soccer with other people.
>>I will talk to foreign people to adapt. I'd like to play soccer with other people.

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