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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed dif

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강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun~
I've just lately come to the realization that, although I feel frustrated when I encounter difficulties, greater things eventually find their way to me. I agree that it is an event that will teach us something, but I also think it serves as a reminder that difficult times are temporary. Therefore, it truly relies on how individuals view a certain situation. 
Chammy

These days, if you say you have this kind of mind, you'll be called a kknodae by the MZ generation. HAHAHA.

Or

>> MZ generation will call you "kknodae" if you have this kind of mindset.

Still, I agree with the following statement.

>> Correct

Because there is a lot to be gained from most of the experiences that seemed difficult at the time, and it has actually been a valuable lesson.

Or

>>Because most of the situations that felt challenging at the time have been instructive and have a lot to teach us.

For example, when you're in-line skating, you'll fall and hurt a lot, but after you've mastered it, you'll be able to skate well, which is the same principle.

Or

>> The same idea applies to in-line skating, where you will fall and get hurt a lot before you can skate well once you have mastered it.

Things that go through for the first time are difficult and hard.

>> Things that go through for the first time are difficult.

However, once you get through this well, you will be able to meet yourself who has grown up even more, and it will help you overcome the next difficulty. 

Or

>> But after you get through this successfully, you'll be able to meet a more mature version of yourself, which will help you get beyond the following challenge.

Also, this could be based on a new solution to any problem.

Or

>> It could be an answer to your future difficulties. 

In other words, these experiences will accumulate and upgrade themselves.

Or

>> These experiences will build up and improve themselves

But I think this sentence is a double-edged sword.

>> Correct

It would be a good lesson if you overcome most of the experiences that seemed difficult, but it you don't overcome these experiences well, you can fall down and fall into deep frustration.

>> It would be a good lesson if you overcome most of the experiences that seemed difficult, but if you don't overcome these experiences well, you can fall into deep frustration.

Therefore, I think you should make yourself so that you can overcome your difficulties smoothly, and you should prepare a lot, especially mentally and psychologically.

>> Therefore, I think you should prepare yourself, especially mentally and psychologically, so that you can overcome your challenges with ease.
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