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2024-10-29 1877

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Q: Why is borrowing/lending risky?
A: I think it's risky because there's no guarantee.
If someone borrows something, and if that person lose it, the owner might feel very bad and lose the trust of him.
Also, if someone lends something and the borrower don't give it back, the lender gets a lot of loss.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

I think it's risky because there's no guarantee.
>>CORRECT!

If someone borrows something, and if that person lose it, the owner might feel very bad and lose the trust of him.
>>If someone borrows something and that person loses it, the owner might feel very bad and lose his trust for him.

Also, if someone lends something and the borrower don't give it back, the lender gets a lot of loss.
>>Also, if someone lends something and the borrower doesn't give it back, the lender gets a lot of loss.

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