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What is a law or rule in your country that you think should be changed, and why?

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It is so difficult the ask. I am thinking about what is something?
I think college entrance exam have to be gone in Korea.
It is truly overheat and the education system in need of reform.
Many student regret that they must have done well the test every year.

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Hi, Ju Mi! I also personally think that this exam brings immense pressure and stress for students. This should be reviewed, and if possible the education system should be reformed as well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this matter, Ju Mi. Enjoy your day! ^^
~T. Jewel
It is so difficult the ask. I am thinking about what is something?
>>It is a difficult question. I am thinking about something. 
I think college entrance exam have to be gone in Korea.
>>I think the college entrance exam should be abolished in Korea.
It is truly overheat and the education system in need of reform.
>>It is truly overheated, and the education system is in need of reform.
Many student regret that they must have done well the test every year.
>>Many students regret that they must have done well on the test every year.
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>>Many students feel disappointed that they should have performed well on the test each year.
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