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What is your favorite dish to eat at a buffet?

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I like to go to sushi buffet.
My favorite sushi buffet is sushi.

but breakfast buffet eat usaully fruits, toast, and coffee.
The favorite menu of breakfast buffe is coffee and boil egg.maybe..^^

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Hello again, Lily!
I can see that your choices of food depend on the buffet restaurant you go to. Also, I noticed that your breakfast preferences are more similar to those in Western countries than in Asian countries. Breakfast buffets in my country usually include fried rice, eggs, and a variety of fried dishes, as those are common Filipino breakfasts.
- T. Caitlyn 
I like to go to sushi buffet.
>> CORRECT
My favorite sushi buffet is sushi.
>> My favorite food at the sushi buffet is sushi.
but breakfast buffet eat usaully fruits, toast, and coffee.
>> For breakfast buffets, I usually eat fruits, toast, and coffee.
The favorite menu of breakfast buffe is coffee and boil egg.maybe.
>> My favorite items on the breakfast buffet are coffee and boiled eggs, maybe.
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